Read the winning piece of our 2025 Nonfiction Contest “Through the Mirror” by Jessie Cato selected by Lucy Ives.

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Mar/Apr 2019 |

Olivine, Quartz, Granite, Carnelian

(Johnson, VT)

On foot under thunder
        heading in from the west,
I wasn’t thinking rain

        but now I’m thinking rain
on Plot Road while I watch
        Foote Brook do its thaw thing :

ropy cold clear water
        pulls itself downhill fast,
its spatter lathering

        granite banks with foam. Up-
hill, up the road, a field
        mown gold. Its curve is cut

by horizon, a veil
        of rain drawn across it
slowly so it darkens

        in increments. I left
the house without poncho
        or umbrella. I’m cold.

The good news is : the way
        Archimedes wanted
a place to stand to lift

        the world, & Descartes sought
one thought as certain as
        the point a lever turns

into a fulcrum, this
        dirt road is a fine place
to get totally soaked

        in the poem. The bad
news is : el niño. It’s
        a bummer to go all

cogito here after
        the hottest winter in
the hottest year so far

        on record, all the thaw
finished by the first week
        of March. Yet I can feel

the color the poem
        gathers inside me, brown
silver interior

        of a dried milkweed pod,
everything outside it
        on a spectrum of wet

& getting wetter as
        the front moves overhead.
A little mist sizzles

        high in the canopy,
its sound in the middle
        distance of the sonic

landscape between Foote Brook
        & thunder, a distance
rusty blackbirds also

        fill from the oak they have
flocked to, so raucously
        dominating its crown.

When the rain hits, they fall
        silent. Then there’s nothing
in the hush but thunder

        & water on water
& water hitting wood.
        Above : the sky a kind

of crushed lilac. Around
        me : Clay Hill an issue
of trickles gathering

        gravity gathering
mass heading south downhill
        to the river. Little

streams even in the mud
        under my feet, I want
to say I feel the pull

        on all my vertebrae,
occiput to sacrum,
        the water in my bones

longing to join the thaw.
        & thought alluvial
too, the way valleys fill

        slowly with gravel sent
down by the surrounding
        mountains : olivine, quartz,

granite, carnelian,
        each stone an idea
washed then carried by rain.

        Down Foote Brook’s leaf-slick steep
bank I slide the way walk
        & watch begin in rhyme

then fail the way those same
        activities fit in-
side each other until

        they don’t : I slip, hit rock,
my body stops, the walk
        stalls, & I sit, my mind

rising toward quiet
        as the brook goes by, south
by southwest. I watch, let

        the current take over.
Over its rocky bed
        the water runs clear, leaves

the distortions made by
        its torsion flickering
the way musculature

        moves its skin, all flexure
& shadow. Do not move
        the X-ray tech told me,

so I stood & did what
        I’m doing now : I watched
living turn to image,

        a bruised sort of bluish
fluid on a white screen
        the rheumatologist

lit up. You might have years
        of mobility left
if you’re careful, he said.

        I could’ve looked like that
for hours at my spine,
        the molecules locked in

degrading matrices :
        where the joints meet up, spurs
curve small bone hooks honed to

        catch on flesh the X-rays
see through, causing the doc
        to write in his report,

soft tissues unremark-
        able. It’s weird to be
always incurring off-

        screen injuries I have
to live with. The process
        makes a space in my thought

like I make a space on
        the brook’s hard bank : anthro-
pogenic nonpoint source

        pollutant, my urine
a potent effluent
        of medicines I need

& pesticides I don’t,
        a pharmacopeia
of harm for riverine

        species. I close my eyes.
Rain on leaf-litter sounds
        like storm wind high above

& the brook thrown downhill
        by its own force, the world
coalescing briefly

        in an unending rhyme
with itself, consonant
        & comforting. I know

it’s cogito that makes
        it seem my ears make it
so. I open my eyes.

        I get up & go east,
back up Plot Road, muddy
        now with runoff. Off-road

landscape ranges from field
        to forest to dwelling
& back, the visual

        rhythm of settlement
& regrowth, clear-cutting
        & aftermath, my eye

always drawn to eco-
        tone, richly liminal
& ugly where forest

        meets field grown over stumps.
I love what yields green there
        then dries in thickets : bull

thistle, milkweed, seed heads
        in hundreds that luster
against the denser screen

        of trees. I love how birds
the size of sparrows hunt
        in the scrub, break cover

to duck between thin trunks—
        the black-capped chickadee
loosing its slow two-note

        sing-song sing-song only
after it lands a branch.
        Some things must be listened

into appearances :
        the thistles for instance
rustle, sigh into sight,

        vatic static in wave
patterns that predict wind
        that hits my face; the rain

insinuates itself
        slowly into puddles
of an abalone

        silver, iridescent
as a rock pigeon’s neck;
        & the poem starts first

as a color I hear,
        its stiff dry stalks shaking
gray & brown. It’s almost

        pornographic, detail
the world offers, texture
        whose totality is

far beyond adequate
        capture, & excites me
anyway, as endless

        as the filaments of
beard lichen the same soft
        bright green of olivine.

So I watch; I walk on;
        I fill my pockets full
of milkweed pods, a few

        still stuffed with floss; I watch
as if I could forget
        the harm that happens where

the world’s flesh meets my flesh;
        I walk as if I could
undo the human self

        I’ve become & remain
through undoing done to
        others. Between walking

& watching the whole world
        slips, goes missing, my mind
empty as the chambers

        of a gun whose bullets
have hit the intended
        targets, residual

heat & soft black powder
        all that cogito leaves
behind. I never meant

        to fire. It’s not my voice
that cries out bull’s-eye! but
        I find my mouth moves too

without thinking as each
        species goes down. & then
I do nothing but think,

        for instance, of a cave
in upstate New York : there
        a fungus introduced

from Europe infected
        bats whose skin spread through touch
a syndrome inducing

        the inability
to hibernate. Awake,
        sick bats use up winter

fat stores & starve, thinned wings
        torn, riddled with lesions.
As hibernacula

        emptied in the east, spores
moved mortality cross-
        country to thirty three

states in the mere decade
        since the fungus first jumped
the Atlantic on some

        spelunker’s boots, perhaps,
or on infected gear—
        extinction follows us

whether we mean it to
        or not. We are the point
the lever turns into

        a fulcrum : by wounding
the world we lift ourselves
        up. So I walk the way

enthusiasm means
        I’m possessed by some god—
I don’t know how to know

        what I know except to
put it on foot, gesture
        as outwardly useless

as boots in a downpour
        on a scale this total.
Just before Plot Road meets

        Clay Hill, an abandoned
barn leans over a stream
        that cuts under its right

back corner, its skewed floor
        strewn still with tools & hay.
A few license plates hang

        on its aged gray façade.
I like the look of it
        the way I like the sound

of the passing cars harped
        on Clay Hill by frost heaves
that rattle their chassis :

        laughable enchantment,
the sort of ruin
        that seems livable

until it isn’t.

A 2020 Guggenheim Fellow, Brian Teare is the author of eight chapbooks and six critically acclaimed books, including Doomstead Days, winner of the Four Quartets Prize and a finalist for the National Book Critics Circle, Kingsley Tufts, and Lambda Literary awards. His seventh book, Poem Bitten by a Man, is forthcoming from Nightboat Books in fall 2023. After more than a decade of teaching and writing in the San Francisco Bay Area, and eight years in Philadelphia, Teare is now an associate professor of poetry at the University of Virginia. He lives in Charlottesville, where he makes books by hand for his micropress, Albion Books.